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All I want to do is hold her.

I want to hold her with her beautiful bird bones, her slim waist.
I want to see her light up and dazzle me with her smile.
To brush my fingers through her hair, and compliment her eyes.
I want to kiss her sweetly, with closed eyes and soft lips.

I want her to hold me.
To whisper and giggle into my ear.
I want her to run her fingers gently over my skin, feeling its softness.
To discover the raw me, without all the cover-up of outer beauty.
I want her to notice all my imperfections and scars and like me all the more.
To kiss me gently, then passionately, our bodies entwining, curves coming together.
To feel as if we are the only two people in the world,
and have perfection, even if only for a moment.

I want her, and her to want me.
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Spartans300 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not so sure. First I have to find her. Then I have to tear down the fortress around my heart and I don't think I want to. 
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MayaAngelDay Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Student
I think you will. Love is a powerful thing.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Artist
love it
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MayaAngelDay Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student
Thank you :) <3
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student Artist
your welcome
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:flirty: So romantic
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jayscriminal Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is a very beautiful piece! Good job!
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MayaAngelDay Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student
Thank you so much! :)
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HKA-4M7 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Writer
Very lovely description of this man's want for this girl. It... Kinda speaks for me >.<
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MayaAngelDay Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student
Thanks darling :) , Im so glad it speaks for you. Its not about a *man* wanting a girl though.
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HKA-4M7 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Writer
I know, but in the context of the narrator, It's a person wanting a girl.
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Gale-OneOfMany Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A relatable and lovely piece. Being a guy, I feel this more towards my girl, but I love that you wrote it in such a way that it can be seen from either perspective. The emotions are perfect. Nicely done.
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MayaAngelDay Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student
Thank you! It came from my heart :) and Im so glad you can relate to it :)
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sasukepewdie Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
good job my friend
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MayaAngelDay Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student
awh thanks :)
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sasukepewdie Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
no prob
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